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But you dont hit the pavement.
Wondering why in bewilderment.
You fall into a sea of red and black.
You feel someone tapping on your back.
You turn around in a whirl.
Only to see a little girl.
You see her smirk and say in a harmonic voice
"In the land of the strange you make the choice"

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15 Comments

Sep. 10, 2009 | 5:28 PM GOTHCLAWZ says:

Is this about life?

Sep. 11, 2009 | 9:50 AM pieplane responds:

yes

Sep. 11, 2009 | 10:35 PM JKMonkey says:

Yonkers born and raised, represent

Sep. 12, 2009 | 9:09 PM pieplane responds:

THE Y.O. ALL DAY

Sep. 20, 2009 | 3:33 PM FloppyNeko says:

My stomach really hurts.

Sep. 21, 2009 | 2:46 PM pieplane responds:

why?

Sep. 23, 2009 | 7:41 PM Balani says:

i'm not a poet or anything, so, what is this suposed to mean? well what the heck, i liked it anyway.

Sep. 28, 2009 | 12:47 PM Aggzza says:

yonkers sounds like honkers

Sep. 28, 2009 | 10:32 PM Trisors says:

You live in Yonkers?
I live close by.

Sep. 28, 2009 | 10:32 PM Trisors says:

Might just come by and beat the living shit out of you.

Sep. 29, 2009 | 2:02 AM toodumbtodie says:

Well, this pome is lacking to say the least. You're rhyming needs work it sounds like you're trying to be a rapper rather than a poet. And it's not what you look like or or what you have on that puts you in a group it's your mindset how you act and what you do. Not how much money you spend on what you where.

Oct. 3, 2009 | 10:16 PM Chymeraxe says:

ABAB format can get sort of boring in medium/long poems, try using a different format.

Oct. 7, 2009 | 9:14 PM Jesuslizard says:

Why is it that every thing on your page is a peice of emo faggotry?\
Go kill yourself.
Now.

Oct. 8, 2009 | 1:22 AM pieplane responds:

GTFO cunt

Oct. 11, 2009 | 8:48 PM ScaryMovieDude says:

Wass Up Nigguher!!!!!!!!!

Oct. 27, 2009 | 2:17 AM twilightofdusk says:

Wow... *speechless*

That's a powerful meaning in a sense of life. I like your technique, and how you describe so much in so few sentences.

More quality, then quantity...

Can't wait for more :3

Dec. 8, 2009 | 6:51 PM pieplane responds:

heh, thanks :D

Nov. 17, 2009 | 1:24 AM dragonrider4567 says:

Beautiful absolutly beautiful

Dec. 8, 2009 | 6:50 PM pieplane responds:

thanks :D

Dec. 7, 2009 | 3:15 PM XnewgroundsgurlX says:

hey! just becoz you like the colour black (i like the colour black) it dnt mean your a emo. I'm not a emo(or goth) and just becoz this person has written poetry, that don't meen he's a emo either. so every 1 whos bothering this guy saying 'go kill you self emo blah blah blah' stop it and go away. if you don't have anything nice to write, then don't write at all. i like the poem by the way :)

Dec. 8, 2009 | 6:49 PM pieplane responds:

exactly, and thanks btw, lol

Dec. 16, 2009 | 12:19 PM GOTHCLAWZ says:

HURR